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Jahil

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zabardast fahad...
qasam say haqeqat may bht he dard bhare poetry likke hay...mashaAllah..
Dil Rota Hai Haan Rota Hai​
Jab Rota Hai Koi Hum Watan​
Kisi Bichre Hoye Ki Yaad Main​
Rizq e Halal Ki Talaash Main​
Dil Main Dabi Fariyaad Main​
these lines r specily zba10.....:(
thank you tooba yaqin kro is TM pe ab ikloti ek tum hi reh gayi ho jo meri kisi b sharing ki tareef dil se krti ho
 
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Toobi

dhondo gy molko molko milnay k nae,nayab hum..
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yar tumhari hansi se to lag rha hai tum b mazaq ura rhi ho meri poetry ka
tumhare poetry par coments oper day choki ho..may u k 2nd coments par hanse te..
mujy sach may bht ache lage u ki poetry...keep writing......
 

Jahil

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hainnn suchii?
chalo phir cb main ake meri 2nd wali poetry b read kro maine abi abi likhi hai kahin aisa na ho new msgs ki wajah se woh ghayeb hojai cb se
 
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sleep(}........ mera laraai ka mood nhee....jao kisi aur se jhagra kero..!!
 

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sleep(}........ mera laraai ka mood nhee....jao kisi aur se jhagra kero..!!
chalo yeh b acha hoa k tumhara laraye ka mood nahi hay
kion k mujhy koi shoq nahi hay kisi k awain sab k sath jhagra krti rahon;))
 
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