yeh waqie main bohat achi likh hai.. sachi main.. main bhi kabi kabi koi apni ghalaz post karon ga.. lekan ab kon thread banay or yeh siyapa hai sachi main
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ahan waqaeeee achee likhi hay..! ager suchi tareef hay tu bOhat bOhat shukrya..!
Jahan aap itne Posts kertay hain wahan aak Thread apni Ghazal k liye bhi bana lain kia Farq parta hay...?
well Hoooria meri comments are nothing, to b v honest bohot he nice poetry ha so nice
lekan aik or masla bhi hai yahan pe logon ko farsi nahi ati.. or meri gazhal bohat mushkil hoti hain..maslan aik sher haiahan waqaeeee achee likhi hay..! ager suchi tareef hay tu bOhat bOhat shukrya..!
Jahan aap itne Posts kertay hain wahan aak Thread apni Ghazal k liye bhi bana lain kia Farq parta hay...?
بہ سعیِ غیر ہے قطعِ لباسِ خانہ ویرانی
کہ نازِ جادۂ رہ رشتۂ دامانِ صحرا ہے
ab ess ko kon samjay ga.. main kis kis ko samjoan ga...
Tu aap Farsi main likhtay hain kia..? waisay samjh tu waqae nahi aye ge kise ko.
Urdu main hay tu wOh share keran..!
main jab full shairi kay mood main hota hun.. phir muje khud samj nahi a rahi hoti kay key main kia likh raha hun..Tu aap Farsi main likhtay hain kia..? waisay samjh tu waqae nahi aye ge kise ko.
Urdu main hay tu wOh share keran..!
.. bhas yeh samjnay walay pe hota hai jo marzi matlib nikaal le
lolxxx..! yane k wOh phir shairy nahi Jokeeee ban Jata hay Jaisay abhe ban gya hay.main jab full shairi kay mood main hota hun.. phir muje khud samj nahi a rahi hoti kay key main kia likh raha hun..
Umm main regular poetry tu nahi likhti..! But I think yah apnay mind ko prepare ker k kise khas topic ko zehan main rakhtay huye bhi ban sakti hay aur Jus Feelings se bhi..! But zyda ter log kehtay hain poetry Feelings pe depend kerti hay..!
Well .. cuz i wana know that ye feelings ke waja se poetry likha ja skta hai jo apne likha v nice ya khud by self without any feelings influence
