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Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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Bohot bohot shukria bhai jan{(thx)}
aur mashware pe dil khush ho gaya
is hi tarah jo bhi ghalat lage
keh diya karein

woh lafz dar asal milan hi rakha tha
lekin kuch loug us lafz ki wajeh se
sheir ko ghalat le liye ke milan aur raat
jab ke pehle misre ke hisab se
raat ho ya din haal e dil o haal e jahan pe
ke tazkire karne pe mabni hai sheir
lekin jab milan tha tab kuch ko masla tha/:)
jabke wese sheir zyada behetter tha

khair aap ke kehne ka tahe dil se shukriaaaa{(popcorn)}
 
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aray aisa kuch nahi sochata , aur jo aisa sochta hy us ki soch he galat ho gi tabhi us k demaag ma aisi soch aati hy

shair tu phir shair hota hy aur milan say shair ma wazn aa gaya hy

app preshan nahoo logo ki perwah nahi kertay jo munib aur wazan wala word ho usy he use kertay hy

any way app ki ghazal superb hy
 
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Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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aray aisa kuch nahi sochata , aur jo aisa sochta hy us ki soch he galat ho gi tabhi us k demaag ma aisi soch aati hy

shair tu phir shair hota hy aur milan say shair ma wazn aa gaya hy

app preshan nahoo logo ki perwah nahi kertay jo munib aur wazan wala word ho usy he use kertay hy

any way app ki ghazal superb hy
Ahaan shukria bhai jan insha'ALLAH is lafz ko milan karwa dengein;)
 
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