Mae Koi Shaakh Pe Khilta Hua Gulaab Nahi

[Fantasy]

Wa'alaikumussalaam @Kit_Kat shishooooooo zabardasht shayari
I loved it

thanx

 

[Aks_]

thankooo ^_^

 

[Fantasy]

 

[naazii]

ary super duper hai ye to... great kati

 

[Fantasy]

ary super duper hai ye to... great kati

thankoo

 

[naazii]

boly to welkoo

 

[Fantasy]

Asslam o alykum... @Hoorain ye laen meri ye poetry nahi prhi ho gi ap ny

mae koi shaakh pe khilta hua gulaab nahi
na he be rang sa beeta hua zamana hun

na khaas itni hun k her zuban pe hun jari
na aam itni k bhola huwa trana hun

wo aik khwab jo tabeer ki hadd per toota
han mae bhoola hua khwab wo purana hun

kitab e zindagi ka baab jo kbhi khul na ska
mae un auraaq pe likha huwa fsaana hun

tumhen mae yaad nhi hun, to koi baat nahi
mae to khud apny liye b ik begaana hun​

@Kavi aik ye b hy

 

[Kavi]

Asslam o alykum... @Hoorain ye laen meri ye poetry nahi prhi ho gi ap ny

mae koi shaakh pe khilta hua gulaab nahi
na he be rang sa beeta hua zamana hun

na khaas itni hun k her zuban pe hun jari
na aam itni k bhola huwa trana hun

wo aik khwab jo tabeer ki hadd per toota
han mae bhoola hua khwab wo purana hun

kitab e zindagi ka baab jo kbhi khul na ska
mae un auraaq pe likha huwa fsaana hun

tumhen mae yaad nhi hun, to koi baat nahi
mae to khud apny liye b ik begaana hun​

Lovely ghazal

So much maturity and smooth description. Loved the flow. Keep it up @Fantasy

 

[Fantasy]

Lovely ghazal

So much maturity and smooth description. Loved the flow. Keep it up @Fantasy

Shukran

 

[Kavi]

Shukran

Afwan