Light Of My Life - Maheen+asheer Jori 2013

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Ahem Ahem ye 1st wali thoti photi poem many kud sy bani hai X_X
bhri mushakl sy :p ap batna 3 lines mein k kasie hai :) :p
For My jori Partner
Phoolon se Taron se aik Mehfil Sajai ha ..
Sb khushiyan Manao hum TM py aye hai :p
Yahan Rehtay hian Mohbbat se bharay Dil sub ..
Hum nay mil kr yeh TM Family banai ha ..
Kartay hian yahan Sub Mohbaton nachawar
Is liye TM ki Chahat humaray dil pay Chai ha ...
TM ny dye hai mujy bhot achy achy dost
jin mein sy ek ka naam hai Asheer ...
Yahan Rehti ha Har Waqt Chehal pehal bohat
is ki Ronaq main Sub ki Khushi smai ha
Har WAqt madad kay Liye tyar Rehtay hian yeh
Dosro ki Khushi main hi inn ki Sub kamai ha
Meri Lafz toh Teri Tareefon kay nahi kabil TM
Faqt yeh teray Wajood ki Nagma Serai ha
Aik Anjaana Se thikana ha Yeh TM
Is se Bicharnay ka Socha toh ankh Bar ayi ha
We have something that holds us together
Something that made us both better
Something called being a friend
It makes the fun never end
And it helps me to know that when
I am down and blue
Because you’re my friend
I can count on you
We run through life without a care
Would anyone try to part us?
They wouldn't dare
And when the time comes for me to go
I really want for you to know
That even though my life has come to and end
I will never stop being your friend
If you are my friend, please answer me this:
Are we friends, or are we not?
You told me once, but I forgot.
So tell me now, and tell me true,
So I can say I'm here for you.
Of all the friends I've ever met,
You're the one I won't forget.
And if I die before you do,
I'll go to Heaven and wait for you,
I'll give the angels back their wings
And risk the loss of everything.
There isn't a thing I wouldn't do,
To have a friend just like you!
@Manxil @sabeha @NamaL @Fa!th @Sana_20 @rockerxx @~Ambitiou$ Girl~ @Hira_Khan @MIS_MaLAika @Masoom_girl @marib @Azeyy @Rubi @Sabah @yoursks @ganillia33 @~Bella~ @Atif-adi @Lost Passenger @Princess_E @*fajar* @HuriYa @Pariwisha @Tariq Saeed @eXcalibuR @S_ChiragH @Binte_Hawwa @Pakistani_angel @Mhk31 @sweet_c_kuri @sabha_khan40 @Bela @LuViSh @aribak @Star24 @*SHB* @Chulbuli @Rukhsana_Bibi @khusboo @Shararti_Bacha @maanu115 @P@ssion @Pri @Silent_tear_hurt @gulfishan @goodfrndz @Raat ki Rani @Asma_tufail
@Masoom_girl @Mas00m-DeVil @*khushi* @ShyPrincess @huny @RukbaMehar84
bht achi likhi ha
you log to creative ho gye ho........
stay blessed
 
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beautiful thread good looking
bhot achi effort hai ap 2no ki aur siggi bhot acha hai ap ka
jori bhi bhot achi hai good luck
 
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Azeyy

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Ahem Ahem ye 1st wali thoti photi poem many kud sy bani hai X_X
bhri mushakl sy :p ap batna 3 lines mein k kasie hai :) :p
For My jori Partner
Phoolon se Taron se aik Mehfil Sajai ha ..
Sb khushiyan Manao hum TM py aye hai :p
Yahan Rehtay hian Mohbbat se bharay Dil sub ..
Hum nay mil kr yeh TM Family banai ha ..
Kartay hian yahan Sub Mohbaton nachawar
Is liye TM ki Chahat humaray dil pay Chai ha ...
TM ny dye hai mujy bhot achy achy dost
jin mein sy ek ka naam hai Asheer ...
Yahan Rehti ha Har Waqt Chehal pehal bohat
is ki Ronaq main Sub ki Khushi smai ha
Har WAqt madad kay Liye tyar Rehtay hian yeh
Dosro ki Khushi main hi inn ki Sub kamai ha
Meri Lafz toh Teri Tareefon kay nahi kabil TM
Faqt yeh teray Wajood ki Nagma Serai ha
Aik Anjaana Se thikana ha Yeh TM
Is se Bicharnay ka Socha toh ankh Bar ayi ha
We have something that holds us together
Something that made us both better
Something called being a friend
It makes the fun never end
And it helps me to know that when
I am down and blue
Because you’re my friend
I can count on you
We run through life without a care
Would anyone try to part us?
They wouldn't dare
And when the time comes for me to go
I really want for you to know
That even though my life has come to and end
I will never stop being your friend
If you are my friend, please answer me this:
Are we friends, or are we not?
You told me once, but I forgot.
So tell me now, and tell me true,
So I can say I'm here for you.
Of all the friends I've ever met,
You're the one I won't forget.
And if I die before you do,
I'll go to Heaven and wait for you,
I'll give the angels back their wings
And risk the loss of everything.
There isn't a thing I wouldn't do,
To have a friend just like you!
@Manxil @sabeha @NamaL @Fa!th @Sana_20 @rockerxx @~Ambitiou$ Girl~ @Hira_Khan @MIS_MaLAika @Masoom_girl @marib @Azeyy @Rubi @Sabah @yoursks @ganillia33 @~Bella~ @Atif-adi @Lost Passenger @Princess_E @*fajar* @HuriYa @Pariwisha @Tariq Saeed @eXcalibuR @S_ChiragH @Binte_Hawwa @Pakistani_angel @Mhk31 @sweet_c_kuri @sabha_khan40 @Bela @LuViSh @aribak @Star24 @*SHB* @Chulbuli @Rukhsana_Bibi @khusboo @Shararti_Bacha @maanu115 @P@ssion @Pri @Silent_tear_hurt @gulfishan @goodfrndz @Raat ki Rani @Asma_tufail
@Masoom_girl @Mas00m-DeVil @*khushi* @ShyPrincess @huny @RukbaMehar84
wow mahi bhoot hi mudha alfaaz
mejy nai pata tha k u Poet b hu bari chupi rutam hu :p
wasey jori ki tu kiya hi baat ha or uper ce u b kisi ce kam nai poetry strt kr do baat mano meri Best of luck :)
 
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As'salaam-o-Alaikum! very nice thread sis, wish u best of luck to u both for this contest , it seems very attractive jori, but sis i can not understand the logic of ur 3 lines comment :/, really its too difficult...friendship is the most precious relation, so i pray to Allah for your lasting relation..and i thing more, you have decorated this thread very beautifully, so stay happy like this always, make others happy too:), stay blessed, Fiamanillah @Mahen
 
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Mahen

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wow mahi bhoot hi mudha alfaaz
mejy nai pata tha k u Poet b hu bari chupi rutam hu :p
wasey jori ki tu kiya hi baat ha or uper ce u b kisi ce kam nai poetry strt kr do baat mano meri Best of luck :)
thanks :p acha tou mein programming chor k poetry start kar do :p
 

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As'salaam-o-Alaikum! very nice thread sis, wish u best of luck to u both for this contest , it seems very attractive jori, but sis i can not understand the logic of ur 3 lines comment :/, really its too difficult...friendship is the most precious relation, so i pray to Allah for your lasting relation..and i thing more, you have decorated this thread very beautifully, so stay happy like this always, make others happy too:), stay blessed, Fiamanillah @Mahen
thanks alot sis actually ye contest hai tou yaha 3 line ya uss sy above lines add ho gie kam nhi iss lye :)
 
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