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aslam o alaikum

mera pehla image designed poetry aap sub k liye..

waiting for suggestions nd corrections

 

[Zee Leo]

Walaikum Assalam buhat achi koshish ki hai janab mere khayal se koi correction nahi .. keep it up and nice poetry

 

[RedRose64]

aww beautiful
keep it up

 

[Amreen]

beautiful sharing dear...kya baat hai...

 

[Rubi]

walaikumsalam...

nycccccc. ..!!!!

 

[Nelly]

beautiful designing
keep sharing wid us

 

[Qawareer]

wssalm u alaikum
boht acha design kia hai ap ne siso..or shairy me apka intikhab b umdah hai..

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Wa'alaikum assalam khoobsurat design kiya hai aap ne gudiya ji
aur poetry bhi achhi hai aur mere bhi khayal se correction ki
koi zarurat nahin

 

[Hans_Mukh]

Beautiful intekhab and nicely designed

no need for correction

Keep it up

 

[Sabah]

aslam o alaikum

mera pehla image designed poetry aap sub k liye..

waiting for suggestions nd corrections

Walaikum Salam Wrwb!
well aapki pahle koshish hain tu achi design banaye hain aapne.. but correction ki baat aye tu dear aapse kahe mistakes hue hain ager usay aap correct karenge then InshAllah next time aur bhi behter bana sakenge.

1: aapne image tu sahi choose ki hain poem se related but ap ne Opacity ya Pir Fill usay buhut kum kerdi hain means image ko es se thora gahra hona chahye tha ya pir aapko Opacity bilkul kum nahin kerni chahye the usay complete rahne deti kio k yeh ek ahem juz hota hain image poetry k image clear and related to poem hone chahye.

2: aapne designer and Website k link buhut narrow likh de hain jho dekhaye bhi nahin deti k yeh design aapka hain, yaad rahe designers hamisha aapna naam large fonts mei likhte hain ta k, ek tu unke design mei edition na hosake 2nd unka naam subse awal dekhe baki website ka naam medium size ka bhi ho to no problem.

3: I think aapne photoshop mei yeh image Save for Web mei save kerdi hain because eske quality thore se low hain yaad rahe save for web buhut acha command hain web and mails k lie but us mei aap image ki quality mostly loose karenge tu usay aap aam images k lie use kare but esay aap manually file menu k save command mei he save kare..

so yeh the kuch mistakes jho aapne next time dehan rakna hain.. pir InshAllah aur bhi behter banayenge aap..
Good Luck!

 

[Hoorain]

aslam o alaikum

mera pehla image designed poetry aap sub k liye..

waiting for suggestions nd corrections

waalaikum assalam

nicely designed by u sis
as it's ur first attempt ,so in my opinion it's perfect
keep it up
GUD LUCK

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

walikumsalam
bohat achi kosish ki hy dear

 

[Toobi]

ahan very nice siiso...
keep sharing

 

[Jiya.]

ahaaaaaaaaaaaan
its looks like awsome
weldone work guriya

u ki 1st sharing bohat beautiful hay
bohat achi poetry hay weldone

and keeeeeeeeeep smiling
keeeeeeeep sharing wid us
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[fehmida ishtiaq]

Wah kia bat hay.........keep it up....GURIYA.......