Naveed-e-Eid

[sOhNi_]

Good one
bht umdah...
bht achi poetry likhi hai zee.... reallly nice....
Khush Rahien​

 

[Zee Leo]

kya Maroash

 

[Zee Leo]

Thanks Lightman shukrya aap ke pasand karne ka

 

[Zee Leo]

mashaAllah..
zee boht khoob..
lekin udas c...
chalen boht khushi huvi..humare poets me ek naya izafa..
likhte rahen..

Thanks Annaya aur ye naya izafa maine pehle bhi kafi share ki hain apni poetries

 

[Zee Leo]

Good one
bht umdah...
bht achi poetry likhi hai zee.... reallly nice....
Khush Rahien​

Thanks Desi Aap bhi khush rahen

 

[Qawareer]

Thanks Annaya aur ye naya izafa maine pehle bhi kafi share ki hain apni poetries

acha..main ne dekhi nhi shyd..

 

[Amreen]

nice poetry Zee...bohat hi dardnak & hearttouching hai...

 

[Sabah]

MashAllah aapne tu buhut he acha likha hain, I didnt know that k aapko bhi poetry athe hain TM pe tu MashAllah ek se berh ker ek Poet hain.
buhut he zaberdast lines likhe aapne Really Apreciate your Poetry
I think you Should Keep it up and Hope to Read more poetries of yours

infact this line is more touchy

Kal Thi Naveed-e-Eid Mere Shehar Main Rasm-e-Duniya Hum Ne Bhi Nibhai
Pehna Tha Naya Jora hum ne ub Rooh pe Orha Kafan Kaise Dikhayen Tum Ko

 

[HuriYa]

Wah Bohat KhOob..!

Aap pOet bhi haIn aur wOh bhi itnay Achay Its a Pleasent surprizE..!

vEry nicE sElection of wOrds to Desrible the feelings.

I like this OnE mOst. :{(*

Kal Thi Naveed-e-Eid Mere Shehar Main Rasm-e-Duniya Hum Ne Bhi Nibhai
Pehna Tha Naya Jora hum ne ub Rooh pe Orha Kafan Kaise Dikhayen Tum Ko

kEEp it Up. {}

 

[~Bahaar~]

waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
bahut umdaaaaaaa..bahtreen Zeeee..........

 

[*Sonu*]

Han Sonu Thanks .. Bus kya karen

hmm
{(upset)}
kuch na kry pr sad na hova kry
({kopping)}
hamesha khush rahy bhai
ameen
​

 

[Zee Leo]

acha..main ne dekhi nhi shyd..

Haan coz main share buhat kam karta hon sub se

 

[NamaL]

her kisi se share kerna acha nae na lagta es liye
bht kam share krty ho
I m right???????????????????

 

[Zee Leo]

nice poetry Zee...bohat hi dardnak & hearttouching hai...

Thankssss ammie .. u toe janti he ho akhir apne dost ko

 

[Zee Leo]

her kisi se share kerna acha nae na lagta es liye
bht kam share krty ho
I m right???????????????????

ji maroash acha nahi lagta ke sub ko apni udassi se udas karon saif bro ki farmaish thi toe bus,,

 

[NamaL]

Thankssss ammie .. u toe janti he ho akhir apne dost ko

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

 

[Zee Leo]

MashAllah aapne tu buhut he acha likha hain, I didnt know that k aapko bhi poetry athe hain TM pe tu MashAllah ek se berh ker ek Poet hain.
buhut he zaberdast lines likhe aapne Really Apreciate your Poetry
I think you Should Keep it up and Hope to Read more poetries of yours

infact this line is more touchy

Kal Thi Naveed-e-Eid Mere Shehar Main Rasm-e-Duniya Hum Ne Bhi Nibhai
Pehna Tha Naya Jora hum ne ub Rooh pe Orha Kafan Kaise Dikhayen Tum Ko

Thanks for appreciate my feelings .. and yap jis line ko aap sub se zyada toucy keh rahi hain woh he asal line hai is pori poetry main isi ke gird ghomti hai pori poetry

 

[NamaL]

ab udasiiiiiiiiiiiiii ki baat ki
toe lagaon gi 1........................

 

[Zee Leo]

kya hmmmmmmm

 

[Zee Leo]

hayye rabba kab ki udassi ki baat