ji bilkul apne khyalath ko safhaat p phailate rahen..ek roz DEEWAN E NASIR pay e takmeel ko pahunchega
ji bilkul apne khyalath ko safhaat p phailate rahen..ek roz DEEWAN E NASIR pay e takmeel ko pahunchega
Kafi achi hai...par agar radeef qafiye ka dhyan rakha jata to aur achi ho sakti thi
bohot bohot shukriya behnawssalm u alaikum
boht arse baad apki ko shairy parhne ko mili..
boht umdah..
boht ache andaz me ap ne ek khawb ko shairy ka sahara lete huve bayan kia hai..mashAllah..
Bohot khoob bhai jan kya khoob andaz se aapne khwaab ko
ghazal mein bayaan kiya maza aa gaya bohot hi umdaah
Rehmat e khushi ko har koi karna chahe apna
phir kyun rehmat e ghum ko har koi karna chahe sapna
***S_ChiragH***
bohot bohot shukriya mohtarma pasand karne k liyewalaikum salam
Mashallah Bhtttt umda poetry hai....
nice wording n well designed
Keep sharing
bohot shukriya mohtarmawa alikum asalam wrwb..
masha Allah aap ne waqi buhot acha likha.
kia aap ne bhi koi esa khwab dekha tha k phir aap ne ye likha?