Poetry by topic (DIL)

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Amreen

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Assalam O Alaikum Frnds....:)

Aaj main aapke liye ek aur dilchusp shayri game le ke hazir huwi hoon...


Ye game hai Poetry By Topics ... {(laire)}

Is game me aapko her week ek topic diya jayga....aur us topic pe aapko koi sher ya poetry yaha post karni hogi...ek member ek hi poetry ya sher yaha post ker sakta hai....{(order)}

ek week bad RR posted poetries me se ek select karengi aur use best poetry announce karengi... v{()|aw

us poetry ke post kerne wale member ko RR ki taraf se ye khoobsoorat flowers as award diye jayenge...{(goodluck)}



Umeed karti hoon ke ye game aaplogo ko pasand aayega aur aap sab is game me participate kiya karenge....:)

her monday ko main ek topic diya karoongi aur friday tak members yaha posting karenge aur final result sunday ko RR announce karengi...:)

Is week ka topic hai...

:)... DIL ...:)

as a example main ek sher post ker rahi hoon... :)


Kaun si baat dil ke bus me nahi
Dil magar apni dastaras me nahi
Kab se aankhen talash karti hain
Ek din jo kisi baras me nahi


umeed hai frnds ke aap sab ko samajh aa gaya hoga ke is game me kya karna hai...:)
so let's start...



Sare members monday - friday tak yaha sharing kar sakte hain & sunday ko result announce ker diya jayega

Note - Agar koi member yaha poetry image post karna chahta hai to use image me apna user name & tafreehmela ka naam mention karna hoga warna image accept nahi ki jaygi...{(order)}​

 
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Amreen sisso ki nazar karti hun ye Sher

Dard E Dil Dard E Jigar Dil me jagaya Aapne
Pahle to mei Shayer thaaa......Ashiq banaya aapne..
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Wa Alaykum Assalam wrwb :)
shukriya mohtarma inshaAllah pehle ki tarah is baar bhi shirkat ki koshish karenge
 
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Dil udhaas hai bahut koyi paigaam hi likh do
Tum apna naam na likho, gum-naam hi likh doMeri qismat mein gham-e-tanhayi hai lekin
Tamaam umr na likho magar ek shaam hi likh doZuroori nahi ki mil jaaye sukoon har kisi ko
Sare-e-bazm na aao magar benaam hi likh doYe jaanta hoon ki umr bhar tanha mujhko rehna hai
Magar pal do pal, ghadi do ghadi, mere naam hi likh doChalo hum maan lete hai ke sazaa ke mustahiq thahre hum
Koyi enaam na likho koyi ilzaam hi likh do​
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Mudat Beet Gayi,Humare Honth Hai Aaj Bhi Sile Hue
Kal Hi Bichade The,Par Laga Jaise Sadiya Beet Gayi Hai Mile Hue
Jab Milta Hoon Unse To Sochta Hoon Apne Dil Ki Baat Keh Doon
Par Jab Bhi Lab Khule,Dono Taraf Se Sirf Shikayate Aur Gile Hue
Ek Umang Si Thi Dil Mein Ke Woh Hume Kabhi Gale Lagayenge
Aaj Gale Lagaya Bhi To Usne Alwida Kehne Ke Liye,
Khoob Inaam Hai Hume Mohabbat Mein Mile Hue
Kya Kahoon Apni Kismat Ke Baare Mein,Main "Khwaish"
Kaanto Se Bhar Gaye The Pair Mere
Yeh Dekh Kar Pucha Har Shaks Ne,
Yeh Kaanto Ke Zakhm Pairo Par Kaise?
Jab Ki Teri Raahon Mein The Sirf Phool Hi Khile Hue
"Khwaish" Ki Aankhon Mein Eh Dost
Kabhi Utar Kar Dekhna Zara
Toote Hue Sapne,Bikhre Hue Khwaishe,
Tadapte Hue Aansu Hi Milenge Tujhe,
In Aankhon Mein Dard Ke Saath Mile Hue
Aur Kuch Na Keh Sakoonga Main Tujhe Eh Dost
Aaj Likhte Hue Kalam Ne Bhi Mujhe Thaam Kar Kaha
"Na Likh Ab Khwaish Apne Dard Ki Dastaan
Dekh Tere Ashko Se Aaj Kaagaz Bhi Geele Hue"
 
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Woh dil ka bura, na bewafa tha
Bus,mujh say yoonhi bicharr gaya tha

Lafzoon ki hadoon say mawara tha
Aab kis say kahoon woh shakhs kaha tha?

Woh meree ghazal ka aaeina tha
Her shakhs yeh baat janta tha

Her simat ussi ka tazkara tha
Her dil main woh jaisay bus raha tha

Mein uss ki ana ka aasara tha
Woh mujh say kabhi na roothta tha

Mein dhoop k bun main jal raha tha
Woh saya-abr ban gaya tha

Mein banjh rutoon ka aashana tha
Woh mosam-e-gul ka zaiqa tha

Ek bar bicharr kay jab mila tha
Woh mujh say lipatt kay ro pada tha

Kia kuch na ussay kaha gaya tha?
Uss nay to laboon ko see liya tha

Woh chand ka hamsfer tha shayed
Ratoon ko tamam jagta tha

Hontoon main guloon ki naram khushboo
Batoon main to shehad gholta tha

Kehnay ko juda tha mujh say lekin
Woh meree ragoon main gonjata tha

Uss nay jo kaha, kiya woh dil nay
Inkar ka kis main hosala tha

Yoon dil main thi yaad uss ki jaisay
Masjid main charragh jal raha tha

Mat pooch hijab k qareenay
Woh mujh say bhi kam hee khul saka tha

Uss din mera dil bhi tha paresha'n
Woh bhi meray dil say kuch khafa tha

Mein bhi tha dara howa sa lekin
Rang uss ka bhi kuch udda udda tha

Ek khof sa hijar ki rutoon ka
Dono pay muheet ho chala tha

Ek rah say mein bhi tha gurezaa'n
Ek mod pay woh bhi ruk gaya tha

Ek pal main jhapak gaein jo aankhein
Manzer he nazer main dosara tha

Socha to theher gaey zamanay
Dekha to woh door ja chuka tha

Qadmoon say zamee'n sirak gaee thi
Soraj ka bhi rang sanwala tha

Chaltay howay log ruk gay thay
Thehra howa sheher ghoomata tha

Sehmay howay paid kanpatay thay
Patoon main heeras reengata tha

Rakhta tha mein jis main khawab apnay
Woh kanch ka ghar chatakh gaya tha

Hum donoo ka dukh tha aik jaisa
Ehsas mager juda juda tha

Kal shab woh mila tha dostoo'n ko
Kehtay hain uddas lag raha tha

Mohsan yeh ghazal hee keh rahi hai
Shayed tera dil dukh howa tha
 
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Desi Lardhki said:
Mudat Beet Gayi,Humare Honth Hai Aaj Bhi Sile Hue
Kal Hi Bichade The,Par Laga Jaise Sadiya Beet Gayi Hai Mile Hue
Jab Milta Hoon Unse To Sochta Hoon Apne Dil Ki Baat Keh Doon
Par Jab Bhi Lab Khule,Dono Taraf Se Sirf Shikayate Aur Gile Hue
Ek Umang Si Thi Dil Mein Ke Woh Hume Kabhi Gale Lagayenge
Aaj Gale Lagaya Bhi To Usne Alwida Kehne Ke Liye,
Khoob Inaam Hai Hume Mohabbat Mein Mile Hue
Kya Kahoon Apni Kismat Ke Baare Mein,Main "Khwaish"
Kaanto Se Bhar Gaye The Pair Mere
Yeh Dekh Kar Pucha Har Shaks Ne,
Yeh Kaanto Ke Zakhm Pairo Par Kaise?
Jab Ki Teri Raahon Mein The Sirf Phool Hi Khile Hue
"Khwaish" Ki Aankhon Mein Eh Dost
Kabhi Utar Kar Dekhna Zara
Toote Hue Sapne,Bikhre Hue Khwaishe,
Tadapte Hue Aansu Hi Milenge Tujhe,
In Aankhon Mein Dard Ke Saath Mile Hue
Aur Kuch Na Keh Sakoonga Main Tujhe Eh Dost
Aaj Likhte Hue Kalam Ne Bhi Mujhe Thaam Kar Kaha
"Na Likh Ab Khwaish Apne Dard Ki Dastaan
Dekh Tere Ashko Se Aaj Kaagaz Bhi Geele Hue"
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Desi Lardhki said:
Woh dil ka bura, na bewafa tha
Bus,mujh say yoonhi bicharr gaya tha

Lafzoon ki hadoon say mawara tha
Aab kis say kahoon woh shakhs kaha tha?

Woh meree ghazal ka aaeina tha
Her shakhs yeh baat janta tha

Her simat ussi ka tazkara tha
Her dil main woh jaisay bus raha tha

Mein uss ki ana ka aasara tha
Woh mujh say kabhi na roothta tha

Mein dhoop k bun main jal raha tha
Woh saya-abr ban gaya tha

Mein banjh rutoon ka aashana tha
Woh mosam-e-gul ka zaiqa tha

Ek bar bicharr kay jab mila tha
Woh mujh say lipatt kay ro pada tha

Kia kuch na ussay kaha gaya tha?
Uss nay to laboon ko see liya tha

Woh chand ka hamsfer tha shayed
Ratoon ko tamam jagta tha

Hontoon main guloon ki naram khushboo
Batoon main to shehad gholta tha

Kehnay ko juda tha mujh say lekin
Woh meree ragoon main gonjata tha

Uss nay jo kaha, kiya woh dil nay
Inkar ka kis main hosala tha

Yoon dil main thi yaad uss ki jaisay
Masjid main charragh jal raha tha

Mat pooch hijab k qareenay
Woh mujh say bhi kam hee khul saka tha

Uss din mera dil bhi tha paresha'n
Woh bhi meray dil say kuch khafa tha

Mein bhi tha dara howa sa lekin
Rang uss ka bhi kuch udda udda tha

Ek khof sa hijar ki rutoon ka
Dono pay muheet ho chala tha

Ek rah say mein bhi tha gurezaa'n
Ek mod pay woh bhi ruk gaya tha

Ek pal main jhapak gaein jo aankhein
Manzer he nazer main dosara tha

Socha to theher gaey zamanay
Dekha to woh door ja chuka tha

Qadmoon say zamee'n sirak gaee thi
Soraj ka bhi rang sanwala tha

Chaltay howay log ruk gay thay
Thehra howa sheher ghoomata tha

Sehmay howay paid kanpatay thay
Patoon main heeras reengata tha

Rakhta tha mein jis main khawab apnay
Woh kanch ka ghar chatakh gaya tha

Hum donoo ka dukh tha aik jaisa
Ehsas mager juda juda tha

Kal shab woh mila tha dostoo'n ko
Kehtay hain uddas lag raha tha

Mohsan yeh ghazal hee keh rahi hai
Shayed tera dil dukh howa tha
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nice sharing sis
Par amreen ne kaha ta ki ek member sirf ek he sharing
karsakta hai
 
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Woh Dil Hi Kya Tere Milne Ki Jo Dua Na Kare
Main Tujhko Bhol Ker Zinda Rahun Khuda Na Kare

Rahe Ga Saath Tera Piyaar Zindagi Ban Ker
Yeh Or Baat Hai Meri Zindagi Wafa Na Kare

Yeh Theek Hai Nahi Marta Koi Judaii Main
Khuda Kisi Se Kisi Ko Magar Juda Na Kare

Suna Hai Usko Muhabbat Duain Deti Hai
Jo Dil Pe Chout To Khaye Magar Gila Na Kare

Zamana Dekh Chuka Hai Parakh Chuka Hai Usse
Qateel Jaan Se Jai Per Iltijaa Na Karee..
 
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~Bahaar~ said:
Amreen sisso ki nazar karti hun ye Sher

Dard E Dil Dard E Jigar Dil me jagaya Aapne
Pahle to mei Shayer thaaa......Ashiq banaya aapne..
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abhi tumhe ek chari lagegi na to dard e sir dard e kamar sab ho jayega....({smilestar)}

chalo koi dhung ki sharing karo...{(nix)}
 
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Amreen said:


abhi tumhe ek chari lagegi na to dard e sir dard e kamar sab ho jayega....({smilestar)}

chalo koi dhung ki sharing karo...{(nix)}
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oops dekha phir wahi chari se daraing...{)^})..yeah share karungi na siss...{(gimmefive)}
 
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