huhhhhh....
AB RISHTA BAN RAHA HAI
Jab banjaye to inform karna.....{(pillow fight)}{(pillow fight)}
huhhhhh....
AB RISHTA BAN RAHA HAI
Theek ahi theek ahi...abb dekho Kaise kaise kaam dungi Farasat k bacchay...SAMJHO BAN gaya hai
nahe mai farasat ka bacha nahe original farasat hi hun
Theek ahi theek ahi...abb dekho Kaise kaise kaam dungi Farasat k bacchay...
Wa Alaykum Assalam Wrwb
masha Allah bohot khoob bro
thanku DB bas kabhi kabhi shayeri ka shok hojata hai hume bhiohhhh wowowow ap nae meri image ko dehk kar poetry likhe hai wah kya baat hai{(oh0(}
mtlb waqai mai meri image hai khas baat hai
ap nae tu bohat ache sai define kiya bro meri banaye hue image ko thanks
bohat zabardast likha hai
walakumsalam..
bohot acha likha hai adi...aur db bro ka work bhi kamal ka hai..
keep it up both of u..
walikum salam
bht hi acha likha hai u na Adi
sply last lines
[GLOW=Red]lakh ho pareshani mumino,
sajdo se ye sir hatao nai.
k mah-e-ramazan abhi baki hai,
rehmato ka darwaza abhi band nai...[/GLOW]
stay blessed
dekho shayer bura ho sakta hun per artist bura nai, mujhse zada tasweero me koi nai doob sakta, me her rung se le ker her tasweer k pehlo ko feel kerta hun{(nea)}wah wah wah...................
DB ka work apni jagah satayesh k layek hai...lekin ye DB k image se ap mohtaram ki ek line bhi nahi milti...
Waise apki shayeri ki daad deni paregi....75% achi lagi....Well Done
Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Aisa sochna bhi nahi kabhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Adi great yaar . *. . *.
logon ki baton par mat jana . . *. . *. i know . . . . *
aisey he likhney ki shuruwat hoti he, . . *. aur baad mein khud ba khud he deep ana shuru hojaati he, kalaam mein . *.. . *.*
kuchh to log kahenge, logaane kaa kaam hain kahanaa
*chhoro, bekaar kee baato mein , kahee beet naa jaaye rainaa . . *.
aur jo samgha rahey hein tumhein . *. . *unkey to jaisey deewan chap chukey hein . . *.yan woh konsa chacha ghalib k khandas se belongs karty hein . *. . *. *.. tanqeed krna kam he unka . *. . . *. .*
thnx nelllllllllluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu {(gimmefive)}nice qork both ov u
But DB ki Tasweer se nainsaafi ki apne...
dekho shayer bura ho sakta hun per artist bura nai, mujhse zada tasweero me koi nai doob sakta, me her rung se le ker her tasweer k pehlo ko feel kerta hun{(nea)}
Ricshaw aur truck k picahy jo shayeri hoti hai bahut umda aur manjhi hui hoti hai janab..To aap kahan wahan...?ab esa to nai kaho, kam se kam rickshaw or trucks k piche ki shyeri to likh hi sakta hun {)^})