Wa'alaikum assalamasalam walikum wa rehmatullahi wabaraktu
kese hain ap sab dost?
abhi kuch der pehle mene DB ka ek photoshp work dekha,
to socha kuch us ko explain kerta hun,
jo bhi us me dikhta hai mujhe,
ye ek choti c koshish hai,
me koi poet nai,
poetry k usolu ka mujeh ilm nai hai
to ager kahi koi ghalti hui ho to
mazrat khwa hun...
ye DB ka photoshop work
ye rahi huamri shayeri
roshni kabhi bujhti nai
bijli ki tarey bhi hain,
mager in me bijli nai
andhera charo taraf hai,
roshni kahi dikhti nai,
ao dost chalo chale,
duur bagh me kahi,
k asman k chand sitaro ki,
roshni kabhi bujhti nai ...
kuch aditional lines...
lakh ho pareshani mumino,
sajdo se ye sir hatao nai.
k mah-e-ramazan abhi baki hai,
rehmato ka darwaza abhi band nai...
kyu?
But DB ki Tasweer se nainsaafi ki apne...
pucho kyunnn?
han u ho na richkshaw k piche jo likhne wale hote hian un ki incharge {(nea)}
Ricshaw aur truck k picahy jo shayeri hoti hai bahut umda aur manjhi hui hoti hai janab..To aap kahan wahan...?
Masoom Kavvon ka zikr kya apni poetry me?very bad...{(nea)}
kyu?
Mei to bas sabki islah karti hun..zer zabar ki...
han u ho na richkshaw k piche jo likhne wale hote hian un ki incharge {(nea)}
Masoom Kavvon ka zikr kya apni poetry me?very bad...{(nea)}
ehsan hai apkaaa {(oh0(}
Mei to bas sabki islah karti hun..zer zabar ki...
Koi mera ehsan hi nahi manta?{)^}){)^})
thnx anuwssalam u alaikum
hmmmm.boht khoob Adi..
main ne to ab dekha..uper wale shair parh k bijli k jane ka khayal aata haiboht ache andaz me bayan kia..
neche jo shair likha boht umdah
likhte rahen..
and nice work DB
To iska matlab abb acha nahi likhte...hai naa..saaf saaf kaho naa..Shawaal me lapetkar na maara karo Annu..inshaAllah ap boht jald or acha likhen ge..
Jeete Raho Baccha...humare shishye bane rahoge to yunhi safalta prapt hogi
ehsan hai apkaaa {(oh0(}
thnx acha acha feel ho raha hai ab me koinshaAllah ap boht jald or acha likhen ge..
to phir female kawa ko kya kehte hain?
Kavvay male hote hain...
kya matlab hai is ka?
Jeete Raho Baccha...humare shishye bane rahoge to yunhi safalta prapt hogi