Sheir Baad E Sheir Contest 19/1/2013

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Assalaamu alaikum TM doston so finally here I am with the Contest​

jinhone contest ka introduction thread nahin dekha wo is thread ko visit karen​

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http://www.tafreehmella.com/threads/sheir-baad-e-sheir-contest.212806/#post-1886519​

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aur jo dekh chuke hain wo bina waqt zaaya kiye shayari shuru kar dein ​

kyunke jiske jitne zyada ashaar wo hoga INSHA'ALLAH​

Winner jise naseeb hoga eik pyara sa Award ​

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aurrr mein bhi shirkat kar raha hoon​

lekin just for fun I cant be winner of my own contest ​

once again a request to all of you aap apni hi likhe huwe ashaar share karen​

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Eik edition ki gaiy hai doston ab aap ne last sheir me se
koi bhi eik word chun kar usse apna sheir shuru karna hai
so let's start it ..

Wo deendaar bhi hai dunyadaar bhi hai​

ae Chiragh teri mohabbat ke kya kehne​

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#1​

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[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

...@Shizuka @faari @rahath @zoonia @Dawn @saviou @Rubi @Atif-adi @whiteros @kool~nomi[DOUBLEPOST=1358613503][/DOUBLEPOST]....@Fahadd @ShyPrincess @Mahen @FallenAngeL @Rubi @sabha_khan40 @mar33n @Sabah @masoom_se_chahat @SHAZIE[DOUBLEPOST=1358613556][/DOUBLEPOST]...@RedRose64 @Don @Abidi @Ally @armaghankhan @Silent_tear_hurt @Iceage-TM @Star24 @rockerxx @ganillia33

 

[Rubi]

Duniyadari sy kisy hy fursat ,​

Kal woh masroof thy aaj hum masroof hyn​

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Walaikumsalam​

acha bro ek bat btao​

sher random post krskty hyn ?​

i mean koi specific word select kr k toh nii krna naw aboce person ki post sy?​

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

...@Khwahish @Sparkofighter @whiteros @Fa!th @sherry2112 @smarty_dollie @~Bella~ @Bela @Tariq Saeed @yoursks[DOUBLEPOST=1358613869][/DOUBLEPOST]

Duniyadari sy kisy hy fursat ,​

Kal woh masroof thy aaj hum masroof hyn​

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Walaikumsalam​

acha bro ek bat btao​

sher random post krskty hyn ?​

i mean koi specific word select kr k toh nii krna naw aboce person ki post sy?​

Anhaan nice one sister nahin bilkul nahin aap apni marzi se post kar sakti ho
no rok tok bas apne post ke sath post# bhi likho to achhi baat hai @Rubi
jese mene first ke neeche #1 likha hai theek aise hi

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Faqat is sabab wo hum hi pe ilzam lagate rehte hain​

ke hum beqasoor ho kar bhi sub chuppi se sehte hain​

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#2​

[DOUBLEPOST=1358613975][/DOUBLEPOST]...@khan2013 @H!N@ @sizs @shizz @Strangr @ahmadali123 @hoorain @azeyy @Qawareer @SUBHAANA

 

[Fa!th]

walikum asalam
good going

Duniyadari sy kisy hy fursat ,​

Kal woh masroof thy aaj hum masroof hyn​

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[DOUBLEPOST=1358613638][/DOUBLEPOST]

Walaikumsalam​

acha bro ek bat btao​

sher random post krskty hyn ?​

i mean koi specific word select kr k toh nii krna naw aboce person ki post sy?​

good one rubi
jeeti raho mera naam rushan karna

 

[Rubi]

#2 Khamosh reh kr bhi guftagu kamal krti hyn​

Ek sukhy lab dusri shikwon sy bharin ankhen ... !​

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walikum asalam
good going



good one rubi
jeeti rahi mera naam rushan karna

bas aap jyson ka ashirvaad chahiye

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

...@~!~RoOMi~!~ @saaaamshrrrrri @asma-tufail @mysterious @Innocent Cat @Naughty Cat @aeshi @ayesha ali @diya ali @Syeda Fatima[DOUBLEPOST=1358614329][/DOUBLEPOST]

#2 Khamosh reh kr bhi guftagu kamal krti hyn​

Ek sukhy lab dusri shikwon sy bharin ankhen ... !​

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bas aap jyson ka ashirvaad chahiye

Zabardast @Rubi sister aap bhi peish karen @Fa!th sister .

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gile nahin karte to unhen lagta hai dil humara dukh nahin sakta​

wo kya jaanen akele me aankhon ka barasna hi ruk nahin sakta​

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#3​

 

[Fa!th]

...@~!~RoOMi~!~ @saaaamshrrrrri @asma-tufail @mysterious @Innocent Cat @Naughty Cat @aeshi @ayesha ali @diya ali @Syeda Fatima[DOUBLEPOST=1358614329][/DOUBLEPOST]

Zabardast @Rubi sister aap bhi peish karen @Fa!th sister .

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gile nahin karte to unhen lagta hai dil humara dukh nahin sakta​

wo kya jaanen akele me aankhon ka barasna hi ruk nahin sakta​

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#3​

bro muje sach mai nai aati
i like to read but kabhi khud nai likhi hai

 

[NamaL]

nice poetry carry on poets..........................

 

[Rubi]

#3​

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Khud jo betha hy chup ky sb sy​

Ankhon py uthata hy ungli ' tareeki mein... !​

 

[فہد]

haan jee kis na cheez ne yaad kya is azeem o be misal shayer e mustaqbil e qareeb ko

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

nice poetry carry on poets..........................

Thanks sister aap bhi poetess ho shirkat karo jaldi se

it is ok munh na bigaaren @Fa!th sister

anhaan nice one @Rubi sister

Tujhe milen phir tujh se juda ho na paayen​

khushion ko meri tarah tujh se pyar ho jaaye​

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#4​

 

[فہد]

Umer Guzaar Di Tu Ne Makan Ko Mehel Banane Main
Phir Khud Gaya Qabar Main Or Mehel Main Koi Or Aya

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Anhaan awesome @Fahadd brother

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Kehne ko to pal me aankhon se guzar gaya wo​

dar haqeeqat dil e Chiragh mein utar gaya wo​

#5​

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[فہد]

Sanam Ke Age Kyun Jhuke Waqaar Apna Rakh Buland
Muhabbaton Ke Husol Main Yun GirGirana Thik Nahi

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Sanam Ke Age Kyun Jhuke Waqaar Apna Rakh Buland
Muhabbaton Ke Husol Main Yun GirGirana Thik Nahi

Wo wafa ke badle wafa dete to achha hota​

mere umeed ke bataur sila dete achha hota​

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#6​

 

[Abid Mahmood]

Anhaan awesome @Fahadd brother

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Kehne ko to pal me aankhon se guzar gaya wo​

dar haqeeqat dil e Chiragh mein utar gaya wo​

#5​

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#1
Abidi b ik shaaer ha chhota saa
shaer jo kehta ha wo hota ha mota saa
(he,he chalay ga na?)

 

[Rubi]

@S_ChiragH hum constantly post kr skty hyn ya nxt mmbr ka wait krna hy?​

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#4​

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Har tooti cheez mein taqseem hun main ,​

Is sheher mein mera thikana ek nahin ... !​

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Anhaan yes funny poetry bhi chalegi @Abidi brother
nice one

Hummm nope aap ne eik reply ka wait karna hoga
lekin agar 12 hours tak kisi ka reply nhi huwa to aap
kar sakte ho post new poetry @Rubi .

 

[Rubi]

Anhaan yes funny poetry bhi chalegi @Abidi brother
nice one

Hummm nope aap ne eik reply ka wait karna hoga
lekin agar 12 hours tak kisi ka reply nhi huwa to aap
kar sakte ho post new poetry @Rubi .

hmm ok