Sheir Baad E Sheir Contest 19/1/2013

[zehar]

waow jaldi jaldi sab shair likho speed pakro 200 ki

 

[Abid Mahmood]

Aap apni misaal ho tum
nahi jis ka jawab,wo sawal ho tum
#2

 

[Hoorain]

1. sawal!

tujhey daikhtey hi bikhar jaate hain
sadion se tarteeb diye huye sawal !

 

[Rubi]

#6​

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Nazron mein aane sy pehle hi bikhar gaye hoty ,​

Kaash hum bhi manind-e-afshan hoty ... !​

 

[Hoorain]

bikhar

chahton may bitaye gaye lamhey aksar
yuhi raet ki manind bikhar jaate hain!

 

[Rubi]

#7​

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Idhar chahaton mein hijr k mausam tohfa hue ,​

Udhar duniya k gubhar sy hum hawa hue ... !​

 

[فہد]

yeh kesi baat keh di hai ke number saath main dena hai​

jb numbr saath hi na dete hon to hum number sath main kyun den​

 

[Qawareer]

yeh kesi baat keh di hai ke number saath main dena hai​

jb numbr saath hi na dete hon to hum number sath main kyun den​

shair kuch smjh nhi aaya
tashreeh plz[DOUBLEPOST=1358666436][/DOUBLEPOST]

Assalaamu alaikum TM doston so finally here I am with the Contest​

jinhone contest ka introduction thread nahin dekha wo is thread ko visit karen​

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http://www.tafreehmella.com/threads/sheir-baad-e-sheir-contest.212806/#post-1886519​

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aur jo dekh chuke hain wo bina waqt zaaya kiye shayari shuru kar dein ​

kyunke jiske jitne zyada ashaar wo hoga INSHA'ALLAH​

Winner jise naseeb hoga eik pyara sa Award ​

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aurrr mein bhi shirkat kar raha hoon​

lekin just for fun I cant be winner of my own contest ​

once again a request to all of you aap apni hi likhe huwe ashaar share karen​

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Eik edition ki gaiy hai doston ab aap ne last sheir me se
koi bhi eik word chun kar usse apna sheir shuru karna hai
so let's start it ..

Wo deendaar bhi hai dunyadaar bhi hai​

ae Chiragh teri mohabbat ke kya kehne​

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#1​

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Wa'alaikum Assalam
dilchasp muqabla..

 

[Rubi]

shair kuch smjh nhi aaya
tashreeh plz[DOUBLEPOST=1358666436][/DOUBLEPOST]
Wa'alaikum Assalam
dilchasp muqabla..

part lo ............

 

[Abid Mahmood]

Teray tusawar se dil behlata hoon
mery har soch,har khiyal ho tum
#3

 

[Rubi]

@S_ChiragH @S_ChiragH yeh sb random way mein post kr rhy hyn​

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abidi aur fahadd​

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[Abid Mahmood]

@S_ChiragH @S_ChiragH yeh sb random way mein post kr rhy hyn​

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abidi aur fahadd​

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how?

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Shukria @Qawareer
aap bhi karen naa shayari yahaan
anddd hunh @hoorain

...@Fahadd and @Abidi brothers aap logon ko
last sheir se koi eik word le kar apna sheir start
karna hai

now they follow the rule INSHA'ALLAH @Rubi SISTER .

 

[Abid Mahmood]

Shukria @Qawareer
aap bhi karen naa shayari yahaan
anddd hunh @hoorain

...@Fahadd and @Abidi brothers aap logon ko
last sheir se koi eik word le kar apna sheir start
karna hai

now they follow the rule INSHA'ALLAH @Rubi SISTER .

okays..

 

[Hoorain]

Teray tusawar se dil behlata hoon
mery har soch,har khiyal ho tum
#3

3:

har soch har khayal se balatar lagte hain
kuch jazbaat itne hi dilkash hote hain!

 

[ChoCo]

Apa b kuch arz kr skta hoon

 

[Hoorain]

irshaad

 

[ChoCo]

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irshaad

irshaad chutti pe hai apooo me choco hoon ainak lga lein apni nazar wali

 

[Hoorain]

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irshaad chutti pe hai apooo me choco hoon ainak lga lein apni nazar wali

sher khud se bnana hay is thread may,,,ainak lga k daikhain

 

[ChoCo]

sher khud se bnana hay is thread may,,,ainak lga k daikhain

yh me ne khud banaya hai shair ainak lgaien