Sheir Baad E Sheir Contest 19/1/2013

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Nelly

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Ohhhhhh ok:oops: thanks for helping bro
mera tu shyd ye 3rd ya 4th hi tha :s m way behind frm dese guyzzzz, so no point counting my ashaaars.....{)^})
 
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Ohhhhhh ok:oops: thanks for helping bro
mera tu shyd ye 3rd ya 4th hi tha :s m way behind frm dese guyzzzz, so no point counting my ashaaars.....{)^})
lolz agar apa chaho tau me and aap mil k 150 shair abi k abi post kr dein :oops: agar ap chaho tau :p
 

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thanks nelly and choco yahaan tu koi a hi nae raha tha mujhy bhi 100 krna tha {()|asf
Bellcome faari me shuru me aya tha but mere funny ashaar pe chiragh bro and hoorain apoo ne fun uraya so me bhaag gya :p
 
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lolz agar apa chaho tau me and aap mil k 150 shair abi k abi post kr dein :oops: agar ap chaho tau :p
150..........:eek: main tu ek sher likh k hi samajhti hoon jese pooori ghazal likh di hai :p sher banana mushkil hain :s warna tu hum b kisi se kum nahin :p
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ashna thy na pehly hum tery dard se
jb tujhy paya tu sab dard se ashna ho gy
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muhabbat ka doosra naam hai dard
chalo tum na sahi, dard hi sahi...:p
 
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ok faari :p

dard

dard kaisa dard hai
kb se usko marz hai
pandol khata nahi
bs kehta mujhko dard hai :p[DOUBLEPOST=1359138007][/DOUBLEPOST]
150..........:eek: main tu ek sher likh k hi samajhti hoon jese pooori ghazal likh di hai :p sher banana mushkil hain :s warna tu hum b kisi se kum nahin :p




muhabbat ka doosra naam hai dard
chalo tum na sahi, dard hi sahi...:p
apa muje bolo me apa ko itnay shair bna k daita hoon :p
 
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ok faari :p

dard

dard kaisa dard hai
kb se usko marz hai
pandol khata nahi
bs kehta mujhko dard hai :p[DOUBLEPOST=1359138007][/DOUBLEPOST]

apa muje bolo me apa ko itnay shair bna k daita hoon :p
lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz :D gud1 bro..[DOUBLEPOST=1359138200][/DOUBLEPOST]
marz
tujh ko saloon se marz hai
sabzi waly ka mujh pr 50 ka qarz hai
82(hgj)
dekho sabzi wala aaya
aaloooo mattar gobhi laaya :D
 
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Shiddat!

itni shiddat se kbi tau bhook lgay ge faraz!
k tumhain StarU apoo k khanay yaad ajaein gy :p
 
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duniya

duniya bohat beimaan hai faari iss se hamesha bach k rehna
yh head&shoulders kay bottles me b vim baich daiti hai :p
 
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