Zid Hai Ke Barf Ka Ghar Banau Mai,
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janab in ashar ke zariye aap kehna kya chah rahe hain?
in ko parhne se to Allah ki insaani taqleeq par hi sawal ho rahe hain aise lag raha hai
NAHI BAHI ASA KUCH NAHI HAI . MARA KHANA HAI KE NAMUMKIN KUCH NAHI HAI AGAR INSAN THAN LAY BUT IS ARZOO KO SIRF AK KUDA PURA KR SAK THA HAI . ES KA LEAY INSAN KE MADAD KE ZRURAT NAHI HAI
@shar
koshish bohat achii hay bhai....
Main shaayer tou nahin, laikin jahan tak merii ilmii maloomat aur adab-fehmi ka ta'luq hay tou main kuch arz karna chahoon ga...
Sha'arii aik aisii zaban hay jahan khayal ki wusa'at insaan ko kahin ka kahin poohancha daitii hay, aur na mumkin cheeszin bhi karnay ka khuwahishmand rehta hay... magar soch main tasalsul aur logic ka istimaal baaz auqat 'chemistry' kay formulas say bhi ziyada paicheeda ho jaatay hain
anyways aap ki poetry ki taraf aatay hain:
zid hai ke barf ka ghar banau mai, (Yeh misra behtar hay, baraf kay ghar IGLOO kehlaatay hain)
suraj sa fursh hawas sa chat bnau mai - (Yeh na-mumkin sii baat hay, koi logic nahin iss misray main)
faqat ak he kafi hai es arzoo ka ley (iss ki tashreeh karain)
phir kyo adam ko khud banau hai (yeh sha'air tou shirk ki taraf jaa raha hay)
har qadam pr jetu ya mumkin nahi, (bohat khoob)
ak haar pr phir kyo asu bahau mai (bohat khoob)
baaqi humaray mohtaram @h@!der bhai @Seap @NailaRubab etc etc apnay comments say aap ko zaroor mustafeed karain gain, khush rahyeh and welcome to TM
koshish bohat achii hay bhai....
Main shaayer tou nahin, laikin jahan tak merii ilmii maloomat aur adab-fehmi ka ta'luq hay tou main kuch arz karna chahoon ga...
Sha'arii aik aisii zaban hay jahan khayal ki wusa'at insaan ko kahin ka kahin poohancha daitii hay, aur na mumkin cheeszin bhi karnay ka khuwahishmand rehta hay... magar soch main tasalsul aur logic ka istimaal baaz auqat 'chemistry' kay formulas say bhi ziyada paicheeda ho jaatay hain
anyways aap ki poetry ki taraf aatay hain:
zid hai ke barf ka ghar banau mai, (Yeh misra behtar hay, baraf kay ghar IGLOO kehlaatay hain)
suraj sa fursh hawas sa chat bnau mai - (Yeh na-mumkin sii baat hay, koi logic nahin iss misray main)
faqat ak he kafi hai es arzoo ka ley (iss ki tashreeh karain)
phir kyo adam ko khud banau hai (yeh sha'air tou shirk ki taraf jaa raha hay)
har qadam pr jetu ya mumkin nahi, (bohat khoob)
ak haar pr phir kyo asu bahau mai (bohat khoob)
baaqi humaray mohtaram @h@!der bhai @Seap @NailaRubab etc etc apnay comments say aap ko zaroor mustafeed karain gain, khush rahyeh and welcome to TM
Q her kisi new member ko bhaghny ka theeka ley raha hai tum dono ny,......
tareef karo, tashreeh nai...Jeem Jahaaazzzz
tareef karo, tashreeh nai...Jeem Jahaaazzzz
Q bechary ki@shar
koshish bohat achii hay bhai....
Main shaayer tou nahin, laikin jahan tak merii ilmii maloomat aur adab-fehmi ka ta'luq hay tou main kuch arz karna chahoon ga...
Sha'arii aik aisii zaban hay jahan khayal ki wusa'at insaan ko kahin ka kahin poohancha daitii hay, aur na mumkin cheeszin bhi karnay ka khuwahishmand rehta hay... magar soch main tasalsul aur logic ka istimaal baaz auqat 'chemistry' kay formulas say bhi ziyada paicheeda ho jaatay hain
anyways aap ki poetry ki taraf aatay hain:
zid hai ke barf ka ghar banau mai, (Yeh misra behtar hay, baraf kay ghar IGLOO kehlaatay hain)
suraj sa fursh hawas sa chat bnau mai - (Yeh na-mumkin sii baat hay, koi logic nahin iss misray main)
faqat ak he kafi hai es arzoo ka ley (iss ki tashreeh karain)
phir kyo adam ko khud banau hai (yeh sha'air tou shirk ki taraf jaa raha hay)
har qadam pr jetu ya mumkin nahi, (bohat khoob)
ak haar pr phir kyo asu bahau mai (bohat khoob)
baaqi humaray mohtaram @h@!der bhai @Seap @NailaRubab etc etc apnay comments say aap ko zaroor mustafeed karain gain, khush rahyeh and welcome to TM
No Doubt, lakin yeh bohat khicihai kernay waloon me sy hein, ball ki khall tak khainch lety hein, baray he adbi be-adab hein
SHUKRIYA JANAAB AAP MUJH SA BHATER HAI BUT MAI KUCH KAH SAKTA HU...JES BAT KO AAP NAMUMKIN BTA RAHAY HAI US KA JAWAB AGLE LIN MAI HAI JANB FAQAT AK HE KAFI HAI ES ARZOO KA LEAY.........AUR JAHA AAP SHIRK FARMA RAHAY HAI .WAHI DEHYAN SA PADO BAHI ....SAWALIY JUMALA HAI UN KA LEAY JO HAR BAT KA LEY INSANO KE TARF BHAGTAY HAI JAB KE KHUDA HAR NAMUMKIN BAAT KO BHE PUR KRNAY PR QADIR HAI@shar
koshish bohat achii hay bhai....
Main shaayer tou nahin, laikin jahan tak merii ilmii maloomat aur adab-fehmi ka ta'luq hay tou main kuch arz karna chahoon ga...
Sha'arii aik aisii zaban hay jahan khayal ki wusa'at insaan ko kahin ka kahin poohancha daitii hay, aur na mumkin cheeszin bhi karnay ka khuwahishmand rehta hay... magar soch main tasalsul aur logic ka istimaal baaz auqat 'chemistry' kay formulas say bhi ziyada paicheeda ho jaatay hain
anyways aap ki poetry ki taraf aatay hain:
zid hai ke barf ka ghar banau mai, (Yeh misra behtar hay, baraf kay ghar IGLOO kehlaatay hain)
suraj sa fursh hawas sa chat bnau mai - (Yeh na-mumkin sii baat hay, koi logic nahin iss misray main)
faqat ak he kafi hai es arzoo ka ley (iss ki tashreeh karain)
phir kyo adam ko khud banau hai (yeh sha'air tou shirk ki taraf jaa raha hay)
har qadam pr jetu ya mumkin nahi, (bohat khoob)
ak haar pr phir kyo asu bahau mai (bohat khoob)
baaqi humaray mohtaram @h@!der bhai @Seap @NailaRubab etc etc apnay comments say aap ko zaroor mustafeed karain gain, khush rahyeh and welcome to TM
taseeh kay liye shurkiya, main nay tou apni rayii say aap ko aagaha kia aur kahan kaha kay main aap say behtar hoon..
yeh @NailaRubab hi aag laga rahii hay....
@thefire1 iss tarh ki post or reply ossi thread me karo.....aakhir aap ko yaqeen ho gaya na kay yeh @NailaRubab bhai hay.... moochoon waali
Bawajha na baat baday kro,,baat krnay ka hunar ho to muh ko azmaya kro.
Faqt kuch be kah dana ya to saleqa to nahi.
Abab sekho phaly pher mahfil mai aya kro..
Faqt kuch be kah dana ya to saleqa to nahi.
Abab sekho phaly pher mahfil mai aya kro..
to phir ap unhain adab sekhain bro. @thefire1 ko oar saat mein @NailaRubab ko bh wo bht c baatain khud se hi kr daiti hain