Shair Mukammal Kijiye...!!

[Asheer]

q k wo kareena k saath hai

really

lol @S_ChiragH ye kesi kesi khabren gardish kar rhi hen

 

[Rubi]

LOL koi tasalsul e ni tha ghazal wala bro
Wysy nazam kahyn to phr achi thi
Ab aapny poetry share krna qn bnd krdi btw?

Wa'alaikumussalaam

hummmm yehi kaam reh gaya tha karne ko kya
khair mein kuch sochta hun

Teri yaadon ke dhair se niklun
zindagi kuch apne liye bhi jee lun

khud ko khud hi bewafa maanu
gar baat koi aisi mein soch lun

dua lun aisi kisi faqeer se mein
is marz e mohabbat se bach lun

wo nayaqeen hi hai bhale hi mein
jaan de dun ya qasam e RAB lun

jaagte mein jiska milna naseeb nahin
haseen khwabon me hi usse ml lun

teri yaadon ke dhair se niklun
zindagi kuch apne liye bhi jee lun

ye lo mene ghazal hi kar di
@Asheer bhai nice thread and silsila

@Aa$hi @Shizuka parho meri nawi nawi ghazal
tum bhi parh lo @Rubi

 

[Rubi]

Walaikumsalam

Teri yaadon k dher se jo niklu
Khudko ganwaun , zeest paun !!

Assalam u alaikum
yaha apko 1 misraa diya ja rha hy.... 2nd misraa bana k apko shair complete karna hy

ummm like....
تیری یادوں کےڈھیر سے نکلوں
تواپنی ذات کی تفہیم کامرحلہ آۓ

koshish kijiye k misraa ba-maeny ho or wazan k lehaz sy thik ho

let's start

dekhty hen sab sy zabardast kis ka misraa hota hy

here is the misraa....
تیری یادوں کے ڈھیر سے نکلوں ۔ ۔ ۔
Teri yaadon k dhair sy nikloon...
@[USERGROUP=109]Tag_TM[/USERGROUP]​

 

[Rubi]

And btw @Asheer mai group join ni kya hua to jb aisy maxy k threads lgao to mjhy alg tag krliya kro

 

[Bela]

teri yaddon k dheir se niklon
to kisi ko apna kahun kisi ko apna bnau!!!

 

[AnadiL]

Teri yaadon k dher se niklun,,
Magar phir khud hi teri Yaad ki mehfil Saja aaun..

@Asheer @S_ChiragH @Hoorain @Mahen @Abidi @shailina @whiteros

 

[AnadiL]

Wa'alaikumussalaam

hummmm yehi kaam reh gaya tha karne ko kya
khair mein kuch sochta hun

Teri yaadon ke dhair se niklun
zindagi kuch apne liye bhi jee lun

khud ko khud hi bewafa maanu
gar baat koi aisi mein soch lun

dua lun aisi kisi faqeer se mein
is marz e mohabbat se bach lun

wo nayaqeen hi hai bhale hi mein
jaan de dun ya qasam e RAB lun

jaagte mein jiska milna naseeb nahin
haseen khwabon me hi usse ml lun

teri yaadon ke dhair se niklun
zindagi kuch apne liye bhi jee lun

ye lo mene ghazal hi kar di
@Asheer bhai nice thread and silsila

@Aa$hi @Shizuka parho meri nawi nawi ghazal
tum bhi parh lo @Rubi

Achi haaii..
parrr Rhyme ni tha zyada

 

[Hoorain]

Wah wah yaadon ka dhair na hua raddi hogai
teri yaadon k dhair se niklu
to zeest ki ramaq paun

 

[AnadiL]

w

Wah wah yaadon ka dhair na hua raddi hogai
teri yaadon k dhair se niklu
to zeest ki ramaq paun

Waahh waahhh..
Kitni ki mili waise Zeest

 

[Hoorain]

Haha @Shizuka raqam nhi ramaq bola

 

[whiteros]

Teri yaadon k dher se niklun,,
Magar phir khud hi teri Yaad ki mehfil Saja aaun..

@Asheer @S_ChiragH @Hoorain @Mahen @Abidi @shailina @whiteros

wah wah wah bohaaat khooob ......nahin

 

[Abid Mahmood]

Teri yaadon k dher se
niklun,,
"to kisi khajoor pe atak jaaun"

 

[whiteros]

nice thread inshAllah i'll try

 

[whiteros]

Wah wah yaadon ka dhair na hua raddi hogai
teri yaadon k dhair se niklu
to zeest ki ramaq paun

zeest ki kia paaon??

 

[Hoorain]

zeest ki kia paaon??

Ramaq matlab nishani ya muharrak

 

[whiteros]

Ramaq matlab nishani ya muharrak

thik thik samajh aa gai achha hai.......to yadon main kia agar ramaq un se bahar mily gi to

 

[Hoorain]

Haha aik do yadain hon to keh lo..ye yadon ka dhair hy yahan saans mil jaye barri bat hay ramaq kitho milni

thik thik samajh aa gai achha hai.......to yadon main kia agar ramaq un se bahar mily gi to

 

[whiteros]

Assalam u alaikum
yaha apko 1 misraa diya ja rha hy.... 2nd misraa bana k apko shair complete karna hy

ummm like....
تیری یادوں کےڈھیر سے نکلوں
تواپنی ذات کی تفہیم کامرحلہ آۓ

koshish kijiye k misraa ba-maeny ho or wazan k lehaz sy thik ho

let's start

dekhty hen sab sy zabardast kis ka misraa hota hy

here is the misraa....
تیری یادوں کے ڈھیر سے نکلوں ۔ ۔ ۔
Teri yaadon k dhair sy nikloon...
@[USERGROUP=109]Tag_TM[/USERGROUP]​

TERI YAADON ke dher se niklun
to jahan e nao k hadsy dekhun
@Hoorain, @Shizuka ,

 

[Hoorain]

@minaahil

 

[whiteros]

Haha aik do yadain hon to keh lo..ye yadon ka dhair hy yahan saans mil jaye barri bat hay ramaq kitho milni

TO INNI MUSKIL HAI to la k phenk do aag la do.... kamazkam saa to ay ga na