Haha ye mashwra asheer bro ko do 
TO INNI MUSKIL HAI to la k phenk do aag la do
Shair Mukammal Kijiye...!!
- Thread starter Asheer
- Start date
maine kab ladai kiHyela kafi hy baji laro to mat
mera maine jo line complite ki btaya nahhin achha nahin hai kia baji ki behn
Aapke aise comments ki wajah seLOL koi tasalsul e ni tha ghazal wala bro
Wysy nazam kahyn to phr achi thi
Ab aapny poetry share krna qn bnd krdi btw?
Mene inne saare likhe saare TM ki taraf se taake iske baad @Asheer bhai humse ashaar na maangekhali 1 linke hi likhni thi
balke misra badal dein
tytWah wah yaadon ka dhair na hua raddi hogai
teri yaadon k dhair se niklu
to zeest ki ramaq paun
hahahah me to dhair ki jaga bhanwar likhny ka soch rha tha
Wa'alaikumussalaam
hummmm yehi kaam reh gaya tha karne ko kya
khair mein kuch sochta hun
Teri yaadon ke dhair se niklun
zindagi kuch apne liye bhi jee lun
khud ko khud hi bewafa maanu
gar baat koi aisi mein soch lun
dua lun aisi kisi faqeer se mein
is marz e mohabbat se bach lun
wo nayaqeen hi hai bhale hi mein
jaan de dun ya qasam e RAB lun
jaagte mein jiska milna naseeb nahin
haseen khwabon me hi usse ml lun
teri yaadon ke dhair se niklun
zindagi kuch apne liye bhi jee lun
ye lo mene ghazal hi kar di
@Asheer bhai nice thread and silsila
@Aa$hi @Shizuka parho meri nawi nawi ghazal
tum bhi parh lo @Rubi
very niceeeee
mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha k tumne likhi haiii
Kar lo yaqeen cause you're optionlessvery niceeeee
mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha k tumne likhi haiii
not funnyyyyyyyyyKar lo yaqeen cause you're optionless
dil to kya dumb deduuuuuu butttt
Oh funny nahin tha.......thanku thankunot funnyyyyyyyyy
dil to kya dumb deduuuuuu butttt
aaho sahi hayye b sahi thabhanwar me ghira hua dhair me daba hua or hujoom me phansa hua
ghooriyan na dalain