Shair Mukammal Kijiye...!!

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Asheer

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Assalam u alaikum
yaha apko 1 misraa diya ja rha hy.... 2nd misraa bana k apko shair complete karna hy


ummm like....
تیری یادوں کےڈھیر سے نکلوں
تواپنی ذات کی تفہیم کامرحلہ آۓ

koshish kijiye k misraa ba-maeny ho or wazan k lehaz sy thik ho

let's start

dekhty hen sab sy zabardast kis ka misraa hota hy :p

here is the misraa....
تیری یادوں کے ڈھیر سے نکلوں ۔ ۔ ۔
Teri yaadon k dhair sy nikloon...
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Asheer said:
Assalam u alaikum
yaha apko 1 misraa diya ja rha hy.... 2nd misraa bana k apko shair complete karna hy


ummm like....
تیری یادوں کےڈھیر سے نکلوں
تواپنی ذات کی تفہیم کامرحلہ آۓ

koshish kijiye k misraa ba-maeny ho or wazan k lehaz sy thik ho

let's start

dekhty hen sab sy zabardast kis ka misraa hota hy :p

here is the misraa....
تیری یادوں کے ڈھیر سے نکلوں ۔ ۔ ۔
Teri yaadon k dhair sy nikloon...
@[USERGROUP=109]Tag_TM[/USERGROUP]​
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funny b bana saky hain :p
 
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Asheer said:
Assalam u alaikum
yaha apko 1 misraa diya ja rha hy.... 2nd misraa bana k apko shair complete karna hy


ummm like....
تیری یادوں کےڈھیر سے نکلوں
تواپنی ذات کی تفہیم کامرحلہ آۓ

koshish kijiye k misraa ba-maeny ho or wazan k lehaz sy thik ho

let's start

dekhty hen sab sy zabardast kis ka misraa hota hy :p

here is the misraa....
تیری یادوں کے ڈھیر سے نکلوں ۔ ۔ ۔
Teri yaadon k dhair sy nikloon...
@[USERGROUP=109]Tag_TM[/USERGROUP]​
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Wa'alaikumussalaam

hummmm yehi kaam reh gaya tha karne ko kya :dumb
khair mein kuch sochta hun :thinking

Teri yaadon ke dhair se niklun
zindagi kuch apne liye bhi jee lun

khud ko khud hi bewafa maanu
gar baat koi aisi mein soch lun

dua lun aisi kisi faqeer se mein
is marz e mohabbat se bach lun

wo nayaqeen hi hai bhale hi mein
jaan de dun ya qasam e RAB lun

jaagte mein jiska milna naseeb nahin
haseen khwabon me hi usse ml lun

teri yaadon ke dhair se niklun
zindagi kuch apne liye bhi jee lun

ye lo mene ghazal hi kar di:troll
@Asheer bhai nice thread and silsila :-bd

@Aa$hi @Shizuka parho meri nawi nawi ghazal :D
tum bhi parh lo @Rubi
 
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Asheer said:
Assalam u alaikum
yaha apko 1 misraa diya ja rha hy.... 2nd misraa bana k apko shair complete karna hy


ummm like....
تیری یادوں کےڈھیر سے نکلوں
تواپنی ذات کی تفہیم کامرحلہ آۓ

koshish kijiye k misraa ba-maeny ho or wazan k lehaz sy thik ho

let's start

dekhty hen sab sy zabardast kis ka misraa hota hy :p

here is the misraa....
تیری یادوں کے ڈھیر سے نکلوں ۔ ۔ ۔
Teri yaadon k dhair sy nikloon...
@[USERGROUP=109]Tag_TM[/USERGROUP]​
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teri yaad'o k dher se nikalo
gar ho aisa,tu kamaal ho!

:p
 
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S_ChiragH said:
Wa'alaikumussalaam

hummmm yehi kaam reh gaya tha karne ko kya :dumb
khair mein kuch sochta hun :thinking

Teri yaadon ke dhair se niklun
zindagi kuch apne liye bhi jee lun

khud ko khud hi bewafa maanu
gar baat koi aisi mein soch lun

dua lun aisi kisi faqeer se mein
is marz e mohabbat se bach lun

wo nayaqeen hi hai bhale hi mein
jaan de dun ya qasam e RAB lun

jaagte mein jiska milna naseeb nahin
haseen khwabon me hi usse ml lun

teri yaadon ke dhair se niklun
zindagi kuch apne liye bhi jee lun

ye lo mene ghazal hi kar di:troll
@Asheer bhai nice thread and silsila :-bd

@Aa$hi @Shizuka parho meri nawi nawi ghazal :D
tum bhi parh lo @Rubi
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ye aya mera shair aya :Mhappy
bohot he aala :-bd
 
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S_ChiragH said:
Wa'alaikumussalaam

hummmm yehi kaam reh gaya tha karne ko kya :dumb
khair mein kuch sochta hun :thinking

Teri yaadon ke dhair se niklun
zindagi kuch apne liye bhi jee lun

khud ko khud hi bewafa maanu
gar baat koi aisi mein soch lun

dua lun aisi kisi faqeer se mein
is marz e mohabbat se bach lun

wo nayaqeen hi hai bhale hi mein
jaan de dun ya qasam e RAB lun

jaagte mein jiska milna naseeb nahin
haseen khwabon me hi usse ml lun

teri yaadon ke dhair se niklun
zindagi kuch apne liye bhi jee lun

ye lo mene ghazal hi kar di:troll
@Asheer bhai nice thread and silsila :-bd

@Aa$hi @Shizuka parho meri nawi nawi ghazal :D
tum bhi parh lo @Rubi
Click to expand...
khali 1 linke hi likhni thi :p
 
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