Shair Mukammal Kijiye...!!

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Asheer said:
Assalam u alaikum
yaha apko 1 misraa diya ja rha hy.... 2nd misraa bana k apko shair complete karna hy


ummm like....
تیری یادوں کےڈھیر سے نکلوں
تواپنی ذات کی تفہیم کامرحلہ آۓ

koshish kijiye k misraa ba-maeny ho or wazan k lehaz sy thik ho

let's start

dekhty hen sab sy zabardast kis ka misraa hota hy :p

here is the misraa....
تیری یادوں کے ڈھیر سے نکلوں ۔ ۔ ۔
Teri yaadon k dhair sy nikloon...
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bot achhy g .pheer kabhi mukalmal kron gi zaroor:)
 
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Aur aapki comment dkh k to mjhy bs aapki choice py trs aya :p aur aapky nanhy se zehan se hmdrdi hui :joy
Jo bechara inni aala shayari smjh e ni saka :shy
Asheer said:
hahahha itna ghussa mat karen aunty :joy u ki poetry me mera face aesa ho gya tha ====> :bongi lol :joy
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Rubi said:
Aur aapki comment dkh k to mjhy bs aapki choice py trs aya :p aur aapky nanhy se zehan se hmdrdi hui :joy
Jo bechara inni aala shayari smjh e ni saka :shy
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hahahhah acha hy sher bas khush :p lekin u ki koi tareef ni ho saky gi mujh sy sorry :joy
 
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Kisi ek k t'reef na krny sy knsa frq prta hy {(popcorn)}
Btao zra ..samundr myn agr ek qatra ni giryga to samundr ko frq pryga ?? Ni naa??
Bas phr :joy
Asheer said:
hahahhah acha hy sher bas khush :p lekin u ki koi tareef ni ho saky gi mujh sy sorry :joy
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Rubi said:
Kisi ek k t'reef na krny sy knsa frq prta hy {(popcorn)}
Btao zra ..samundr myn agr ek qatra ni giryga to samundr ko frq pryga ?? Ni naa??
Bas phr :joy
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chalen ap ja k ninno karen aesy khuli ankho sy khuwab achy ni lagty :joy
 
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Sabar to Sabar hay har baar nhi hota
wah wah wah
sabar to sabar hay baar baar nhi hota
Tukka aik baar hi lagta hay baar baar nhi hota :p
 
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Hoorain said:
Sabar to Sabar hay har baar nhi hota
wah wah wah
sabar to sabar hay baar baar nhi hota
Tukka aik baar hi lagta hay baar baar nhi hota :p
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Waaah...:p
Mehfil loot li apne..: :joy
 
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